Subject: Re: [FFML] Surreal World, updated copy.
From: "H. Torrance Griffin" <heretic@jhunix.hcf.jhu.edu>
Date: 4/7/1997, 12:24 PM
To: Hitomi Ichinohei
CC: David M Lerman <mdlerma2@gsbpop.uchicago.edu>, fanfic mailing list <fanfic@fanfic.com>

On Sun, 6 Apr 1997, Hitomi Ichinohei wrote:
On Sun, 6 Apr 1997, David M Lerman wrote:

  I think you need to explain why Nodoka can move in. If Nodoka can move in, then why not any of Ranma's
fiancees, or Lum, or Mihoshi?  (By the way, what happened to the FFML
Mihoshi?)  Amazons in formfitting dresses, alien princesses in bikinis, or
ditzy space blondes would each be more likely to improve viewer ratings, at
least among men. 

They only had one room left...

And Nodoka took advantage of that fact.  ^_^
	Urp... do you mean that she's _staying_?
	Out of curiosity, if Nodoka is worried about 'Ranko' how is she
going react to with Madoka, Lum, or heaven help her Ryoko?

  The fundamental problem, as I see it, is that this story doesn't have
that same whimsical light-hearted insanity that RpM has achieved in his
story.  

Well, I tend to go for the psycological prospective more.
	Understandable, Full Bore Comedy is not always easy to write.

HTG