This is a really great piece of writing, I find myself envious ^_^
I want to read some more.
  I like reading fiction that explores characters minds that deeply 
and, whilst I don't think that Takahashis characters would act like 
that. If Ranmaverse Nerima were in the real world this would be damn 
realistic.
  One of the other things I really liked was that first talk between 
Akane and Nabiki. It was a really nice touch to have 'value' words in 
all her sentences. I am assuming this was done on purpose *grin* 
Little things like that really make me like work like that, it shows 
more than average care for your writing. So, many Kudos for bringing 
us a fine piece.

Sayonara




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