On Wed, 2 Apr 1997, Thomas R Jefferys wrote:

Date: Wed, 2 Apr 1997 21:35:04 -0500
From: Thomas R Jefferys <wyrm@mail.utexas.edu>
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: Re: Happi's Delight
Resent-Date: Wed, 2 Apr 1997 22:26:58 -0500
Resent-From: fanfic@fanfic.com

Mike Loader pulsed:

On Sun, 30 Mar 1997, G.T. Hamilton wrote:

Arnold Kim wrote:

        Shadow Bastard

                I think you suck.

Gosh, isn't it great to get this level of intense, penetrating, detail in
C&C? The sheer elouquence of it leaves me breathless. Replacing the term
"Dancer" with "Bastard" is an inspired comment of the almost Proustian
nature of the neo-bohemian relationships in the fic, whilst Mr. Kim
elegantly comes to the root of the grammatical imbalance with his
symbolically apt, "I think you suck." I only hope that my own humble works
will merit such exhaustive analysis.

Hai, and he only gets better!

His ability to effectively C&C has improved tremendously from his comments
and suggestions on my own fanfic. His analysis of Shadow Dancer's fiction
exceeds the word count of the analysis of mine by four times, WOW! I'm
impressed! How does he find all that time to write his exhaustive C&Cs?


Currently processing Arnold Kim's helpful suggestions...

I DID NOT WRITE THE ORIGINAL MESSAGE! SOME FOOL BROKE INTO MY ACCOUNT AT
SCHOOL!  I AM _NOT_ THAT CHILDISH!

Arnold Kim
aka SIr Arnold, proud member of the Knights of the True FIancee, Akane
Tendo 
Long live Akane!

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