Okay, I've found time to read a couple more stories, here's some 
C&C:

Naisho: Let me just say that I liked Saishu no Wakare and I liked 
this story too. Even though angst-ridden, hypersad fics have a 
tendency to depress, when done well you can't help but enjoy them. 
Naisho is one of the better fics I've read recently.

Nibunnoichi no Sakura: Whoa. Heavy. Makes you want to curl up in a 
ball and cry for a few days.
This is a very good story in my opinion, it does a great job of 
conveying the emotions. I only have two gripes about it: the overuse 
of "imouto" and the fact that Nabiki is more likely to call Ranma 
"Ranma-kun" or "Ranma-chan" than "Ranma-san". Otherwise, this was a 
pretty good piece.

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