In the interest of not flooding everyone's boxes, I'm condensing 
three different sets of comments into one mail.

Palmer's "Black": Palmer-san, this is shaping up to be another great 
'fic. Good work. One note though: Make sure you go through and do a 
proofread. I caught a few little typos in there. Otherwise, it's a 
good piece as usual.

"Closing The Chapter": I liked this. Nice wordplay, nice descriptions 
of the emotions. Better than the first incarnation 100 percent. 

"Happi's Delight": ShadowDancer, I'm not going to be as vulgar as Mr. 
Kim, but I have to say that this was not exactly something you should 
be proud of yourself for writing. I really didn't care for it at all. 
To be perfectly honest, I think you need to abandon this and either 
go write a good lemon or else go read some good lemons. Just...just 
don't continue this 'fic. It's a bit too sick.



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