SQUN29A@prodigy.com ( ROBERT   MORRISON) : Wrote:

In the interest of not flooding everyone's boxes, I'm condensing 
three different sets of comments into one mail.

Palmer's "Black": Palmer-san, this is shaping up to be another great 
'fic. Good work. One note though: Make sure you go through and do a 
proofread. I caught a few little typos in there.

    It really wasn't even ready to go out, I just wanted to publish
    my "dark" fic on April 1.

Otherwise, it's a 
good piece as usual.

    Thanks, but I must admit some hesitation, I haven't really found 
    the right <mumble> for this story, it seems to flow but there's
    just something missing. Oh well. 

    J.



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