Uh... guys? I posted grammar & spelling corrections on this story to the FFML
about _two months_ ago. Most of the same ones, IIRC.

Yours was fun to read, though. Maybe I could get you guys to MST one of my fics
sometime?

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics