By Matt Urban <Urbanm@genius.rider.edu>

I'm not sure where this is going. At this point it seems like Nodoka is going to
whip everybody into shape (so to speak) and solve her son's problems. I hope
that it won't be like that.

The otakufic parody in the beginning was funny.

Not much else to say here, as this was just an intro. Keep writing!

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics