By Ranchan <ranchan@total.net>

A fine story! Even though we've seen a lot of deathfics, I quite enjoyed reading
this one.

A couple of comments: Some description of the monster would've been nice; just
calling it a "huge thing" is kinda vague. And why didn't Tofu try to use a
pressure point to subdue Ranma? Easier and quicker than giving him a shot.

Looking forward to the next part!

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
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