drift5@ihug.co.nz wrote:

OK I'll send more feedback next time I see some of your work, glad
you liked my c&c :)

Ciao
   NeonB.

thanks and stay in touch.

	If anyone wants to know, I've nearly completed chapter 3. or actually
finished enough for chapter 3 but may not wish to break up the current
story into parts. like h first one.
(of course, With me spending more time reading other's stories than
writing myself it's a minor mirricle.) 
Perhaps i'm lacking in motivation to write more? PLEASE! people send me
more FUELLLLL! I need Cri.ti..ci.shimmmm....... *plop*

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We are experiencing techinnical difficulties and will be resuming our
programming as it is rectified. please stand by. *click*

background; 
(your story sucks, not enought Akane! you also need to tune up the Akane
character more! so get to work!)
(Thank you, thank you I AM ALIVE!) 

WE now resume our normal programming. *click*
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Jai nei. and thanks for your crit.

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        may the light shine forth young warrior.
        The day is gone and the night is coming,
        let the light shine forth and illuminate the darkness
        beyond....
                don't know where I got that one. don't really care
(at least untill now.) :Q:Q:
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