On Sun, 23 Feb 1997 09:23:48 -0800, Henry J. Cobb <hcobb@slip.net> wrote:

[Ranma] "No Need for Ranma!" (1/?)
By Henry J. Cobb

Ranchan thought me so much that day, about commitment.

taught

---------- Six years ago.

I thought Ranma's Neko-ken training was much earlier than that.

"This generic template type spring being.  It turn whoever get dunked
into male human like they would be born as if they born woman or animal
was.  To the young master, his father or myself no effect there would be
being."

GROAN...

"Nabiki, how could you!"  Akane screamed, tears in her eyes, she rose
and faced her sister with clenched fists.  Then ran upstairs and slammed
a door after her.

Need a subject for this last sentence.

"Don't worry about me.  Worry about yourself!"  She charged in and began
a furry of combination moves.

flurry

I like the way you've rewritten the first part of this. I'm not sure where
you're going in the second half with Nabiki. She was never very interested in
Ranma in the regular series but she seems interested in his replacement here. I
guess I'll find out as the story unfolds!

Gary Kleppe
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