Hello. I have posted a few short stories here before, which have been
overall well received, but without very much criticism, largely because I
didn't write enough for anyone to get their teeth into it. When the story
clocks in at under 1.5K, there isn't alot of room to nitpick.

  Unfortunately I feel my writing suffers, and I would like criticism to
improve it. I'm working on a longer piece, but I don't want to post it to the
world, until I at least get to the main point of the story. I have about 90K
written, and I haven't gotten the story to the point where the tale I want to
tell can begin.

  I also don't want to post it generally, because at the rate I am going, it
may never be done. I started four months ago, and have written 6 days of
story. It'll be another three or four days before the subject of the story
appears, and the contrived beginning is explained somewhat

  I would like a half dozen volunteers who'd tear apart my first 6 days of
story, and suggest improvements.
						Neil Reynolds
Author of:
Regrets after it's too late
Ubiquitous Tears
The only other solution