On Sun, 23 Feb 1997 13:53:10 -0700 (MST), Eimii <eimii@selway.umt.edu> wrote:
Second: I have to give credit to Jim nutley for Kunou's rant. It's scary
how well he does that sometimes...
You're telling me!
Fourth: I have to _beg on my hands and knees for C&C_.
Fifth: I have to appologize again, for the fact that my writing speed
isn't great, so chapter four will probably be a while. Then there is the
fact that i also have two other things in the works...
Sixth, you have to stop apologizing because you've written another great
chapter! I noticed a few typos -- one "loose" that should have been a "lose",
and a lot of "it's" that should have been "its". This word gets an apostrophe
*only* if it's the contraction "it is". I'm curious to know where Ukyo was in
the last fight scene, why she didn't intervene, but I guess we'll find out in
the next part. Keep on writing, and don't worry if it's slow as long as you get
it done eventually!
Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics