Subject: RE: [FFML] [BETAFIC] Ranma 1/2 - A Demon's Delight - Chapter 2: The Unforgiven
From: "Doug Murphy" <Draxon-X@msn.com>
Date: 2/23/1997, 2:12 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com, x94quek1@wmich.edu

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From: 	Quek, Kwang-Ee
Sent: 	Saturday, February 22, 1997 12:08 AM
To: 	fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: 	Re: [FFML] [BETAFIC] Ranma 1/2 - A Demon's Delight - Chapter 2: The 
Unforgiven




this is Cool! akane will become more tempered by this techeneque because
she will always be araid that she will kill someone. and Ranma will
become more courtious because of her techneque. Super idea. and cool
fic. just one question. when are you going to write a new one? 

Q commentor of fanfic ideas and stories.





Thanks for the coments.  I'm currently working on places to add to that 
chapter.  I introduced a completely new character, so I think I need to add a 
little more to his personality/history before he gets blown away by Akane.  
I'm also going to change Ranma's outlook on the technique before he actually 
sees it.

I have part three planned out -- It will be somewhat longer than part two, and 
I intend to start working on it on Monday.  You can expect the beta version 
sometime near Friday.  Tell me if you noticed any shaky points during the fic 
so I can change them before I get too far into the storyline.

Thanks,
Draxon-X@msn.com