WebDragon wrote:
 

        Ok, I'll send them all ASAP.

	Cool, thanks...read....read...chuckle...Gosunkugi COOL!!!...read
...read...heh, Akane dear, Shampoo'd slam you into a hurt locker so fast
...read...read...errrrr....wait a sec....reread...THIS IS A LEMON?!?!

	Geeeez, you could have warned me.  I'm not a real big fan of Lemon
stories...Stop waving that copy of *Boy Are You Guys Gonna Hate Me ;)*
in my face.  I use Lemons for humor gags, but not for serious stories.
	
	Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with that, I just don't
because I don't have the ability or knowledge neccisary to write one.
	
	Be that as it may, I liked your story a lot.  The script format really
didn't give me any trouble at all.  Do you realize how LONG this stories
going to be if you convert it to prose?

	Before you ask me my opinoin on prose or cons (Couldn't resist, don't
worry the Gecko's still rampaging in my Omakee story, we're safe)
you need the ask yourself, what do I intend to do with this.

	If your writing it just to get the story out, why change anything...if
your writing to impress other writers, like Redneck Gaijin, then you
WILL have to rewrite the whole thing...If your writing it as a public
service to fandom at large, keep it in the script format and find a good
artist, DOUSHINJI!

	Hope that helps, nice story by the way...keep writing...oh and read
some of MY stories once in a while, they are SO LONELY!!!