David Myers wrote:
Yusaku: At last I finally managed to pick up those tickets to that concert
which is on tonight.
This statement is a tad bit clumsy, other then that, I couldn't see
anything wrong in your writing
Should anyone have any cool idea's on how to resolve the little dilemma
above please feel free to post them to me.
NANII???? Wait a sec, you post a GOOD Maison Ikkoku fic, something I
didn't think was possible. You post it in script format and yet it's
easy to understand and enjoy, something else I didn't think was
impossible. AND NOW YOUR SAYING YOU DON'T HAVE AN ENDING!?!?
BURN HIM...BURN THE WITCH..."How do you know he's a witch"...HE WRITES
LIKE ONE...HE TURNED MY EXPECTATIONS INTO A NEWT...they got better...
Finish it, or I shall have to hurt you...grins evilily to himself
knowing full well haw depraved one of HIS revenge fics can get!!!
Liked your story though, just keep writing, if you value your manhood
;)