paragraph 12 or so.

“Try telling that to Ryouga here.”  He pointed his thumb over his
shoulder at the other boy.  Ryouga just glared at him.  “He always seems
to mad about something.”

 
to mad?
 
50 odd,

“They don’t do things that way in America.  Forced engagements feel out
of fashion a century ago.

Feel?
 
      Interesting, a Ranma 1/2 focusing on storyline rather than comedy.
anyway can you send me the first 4 of the series in zip or text? or do
you have it archived somewhere?