I liked your story.  It was an interesting take on the Wrong Ranma Cast
member gets the love potion.  Your writing style is fun to read without
being overly blunt with the humor (the bane of my writing style)  Please
continue.
	
	By the way, be carefull in mixing humor and intense moments of
realistic violence, the scene with Akane would have been brutal enough
without Ranma beating her up.  Remember *Nihao My Concubine* ?  The way
that seen with Ranma, Akane and Ryouga was FULL of power and depression
for the rejected.  Ryouga was cripled with grief and no one swung a
punch. 

	Now be a good FFMLer and send ME some C&C...remember, it's better to
give, then recieve...especially if they're flames ;)