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A fine fic, truly. Ukyou always seems to be the one who loses out in the
Ranma relationship arena in fanfics. For ever and ever, she seems to
pine over Ranchan, taking years if ever to get over him. THANK THE GODS
that you wrote Ukyou as the strong character that I, and many others, 
see her to be. She's strong, she'd get over Ranma sooner or later.

She might have her... ghost, as you put it, dredge up all the old feelings,
but she has... hmm... let's say closure. She has her own life, and it
no longer revolves around Ranma.

Besides that, it was a nice study of the emotions and thoughts behind
Ukyou and a very possible future Ranma.

I liked it. 

Does the ghost parts fit or do they hold up the story?  That's also from
me.  The title comes from 'Your Ghost' sung by Kristin Hersh.  Other songs
that somewhat influenced this was 'In Love With Your Ghost' by the Indigo
Girls and 'Living in a Haunted Heart' by Andy Partridge.  I love
Valentine's Day--don't you?

No, don't worry about the ghost parts. The story flows, which is the
important thing. It doesn't matter how long or how short a fic is, as
long as it flows... I see no reason to cut the ghost bits out of it.

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By the way... that bit about what happened to Ryouga and how Ukyou met
her husband... that was a bit weird.

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