rpm39788@bayou.uh.edu wrote:

the only thing that I feel needs improvement in the story is
the frenchy-type villian.  Granted, with one hit he gets
KO'ed.... but he evades Ranma's attacks with alarming _ease_.
With all Ranma villians before, Ranma came out on top because
he overcame his enemy's technique and further improved his own.
The only exception to this, I believe, was Saffron, in which
Akane played a part in his defeat.

Not to mention the fact that he doesn't even manage to
get the few French words he speaks properly ;_;
And I don't have the time to go through it all with a
red pen ;_; x 2

As for the ease of the defeats, this must be because the author
belongs to the "ranma is worthless" school. The use of Tarou
is symptomatic 8-)

A+

J.