Subject: Re: [FFML] (fanfic) (Ranma) Fulfillment III
From: "H. Torrance Griffin" <heretic@jhunix.hcf.jhu.edu>
Date: 2/20/1997, 9:52 PM
To: Scott Jamison
CC: Fanfic ML <fanfic@fanfic.com>

	Minor (actually Fairly Major) Nit: Ranma's curse only turns him
into a female version of himself, if Kuno somehow gained it he would end
up looking like Ko-chan (not a bad thing actually, but any resemblance to
Osage no Onna would be a product of his deluded mind)
	<suddenly double takes at story>
	You didn't...
	<re-reads and allows actual plot to sink in>
	You _DID_! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
	As for the end, it proves you to be an utter Sadist.  Even if
Tatewaki deserved Mikado (which (s)he does not), how could you subject
Kodachi to such a fate!?!

HTG