Minor (actually Fairly Major) Nit: Ranma's curse only turns him
into a female version of himself, if Kuno somehow gained it he would end
up looking like Ko-chan (not a bad thing actually, but any resemblance to
Osage no Onna would be a product of his deluded mind)
<suddenly double takes at story>
You didn't...
<re-reads and allows actual plot to sink in>
You _DID_! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
As for the end, it proves you to be an utter Sadist. Even if
Tatewaki deserved Mikado (which (s)he does not), how could you subject
Kodachi to such a fate!?!
HTG