...

(Sniffle)

You are cruel... plain and simple.

I've barely recovered from Richard Lawson's "Transitions", and then you
come along and nail the list with THIS!

AND I CAN'T HATE YOU EITHER!!

Because... well, it was good. Not just good, REALLY good. Great even,
and I can never hate anyone for writing a great fic.

Okay (Snerk!) I'm okay now. On to the serious C&C.

I'd like to see more scenes between Ranma and his mother. So far that
mostly happens in the background. You might also want to write the
wedding scene where Ranma says he doesn't want to marry Akane (Their
subsiquent dicussion didn't make sense until about halfway through).

I loved the scene with Ranko, especially how the issue of Ranma's curse
never gets addressed, because it essentially becomes irrelevant. Ranma
tells Nodoka what he needed to tell her, without robbing her of her
'daughter'.

I'm gonna go find a nice quiet corner to cry in now. Thank god I read
this at home and not at the campus computer lab.

The Prime Sagittarian,
Alpha 'Sniff... Sniffle... WAAAAAAHHH!!!' Centauri

"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is
that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness
that frightens us."

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