Richard Lawson wrote a story with soul.
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But, ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--
It gives a lovely light!
Edna St. Vincent Millay
I used this quote before in a light hearted moment.. I use it again
because it captures how I feel about this story.
Questions of existance and humanity are always knotty.. but Natsume
Atsuko as you have depicted her is more human... more _humane_ than 99%
of the worlds population.
Human is as human does.
Don't change a word of it! (Aside from spelling ^_-)
I won't be deleting this one.. another for the 'GOOD' file!
--
Barry Cadwgan (
BCADWGAN@FL.NET.AU )
"The end does not justify the means.
The end is the sum of the means,
as the road travelled determines the destination."
Valijon Starbringer (Hellflower Trilogy, Eluki bes Shahar)