| Subject: Re: [FFML] The One Line |
| From: Caroline Seawright |
| Date: 2/14/1997, 9:06 AM |
| To: TimeRunner |
| CC: fanfic@fanfic.com |
I have finally figured it out. The one line that distinguishes the good lemons from the bad! Or rather, the lack of it. "I'm going to cum!!!" I'm not really a lemon fan, but I know a good story when I read one, and any lemon writer who avoids the trap of using this phrase has my respect. Can you say, 'Kun-chan'?
Thanks! ^_^ (But then, I can spell the word 'come' ... ^_~ ) Kun-chan...