Been looking through Little Wing, by The Reb <archer@senet.com.au>
I don't have any sort of great idiosyncratic rating system...

Overall Opinion: Mildly interesting, but with a weak plot.
Spelling: I think I found 1 error in a 10 part fic.  That's dang good.
Plot: Not that great.  Too straightforward.  Not enough explanation.  WAY
too much reliance on ki attacks. (introduces appx 10 new ki attacks)

Bad points: Introduces new character who fights better than Ranma and
cooks better than Kasumi.  This character has a fight with another
supercharacter using brand-new ki techniques.  No explanation for who they
are or why they're fighting.  The story is mainly about the new
characters, and uses Ranma and Ryouga as minor characters.  Way too many
fight scenes (episode 8 is 100% fighting, literally)

Opinion: Not my style of things...It was a very well written bad idea.
Unfort, I don't think that there is salvation for this story.
(That's salvation in the sense of being saved.  Not in the religious
ideal)


Terrence Marks
Second Student in the Tendo Kasumi School of Philosophy
-Seeking enlightenment through normalcy.
normal@grove.ufl.edu