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  Review: Ranma no Hentai by Kunoichi
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Rating: Super Leet

"Super Leet" falls between "Badass" and "F'ing Awesome!"

Waiwai, I get a Super Leet! (Whatever a leet may be...) ^_^

This fic was a MASTERPIECE!  Well, sorta.  I detected a note of whimsicality
on Kun-chan's part throughout the whole thing. ^^  But check it out.

Tee hee. ^_^;

It features Ranma and Akane, both as guys!  That's right!  And they do it!
Ranma actually screws Akane through the ass!  Is that novel or _what_?

Well, that's one way of putting it!

Okay, let me admit something here.  Kun-chan's fics have always had this sort
of political-correctness aura about them.  They're so...well...they remind

Eww! But I _hate_ PCness... Bleh ... bleh ... icky, yucky thing. PCnes is
for feminists!!!!

me of Mr. Roger's Neighborhood, or maybe of the Care Bears, in their mood and
tone.  The Care Bears after they get drunk, that is.  ^^  Anyways, this had

*laugh*

always kind of bugged me.  I'm not saying that the Nubin no Ichi was terrible,
just that parts of it nagged me.  HEY--I read the whole thing!  So there.

Well, sue me ... I'm a romantic. ^_~

Anyways, the way it started was cool--bam, right in the middle of the action.
Akane becomes a guy, and the expected excuse for not being able to find
the Spring of Drowned Girl is tossed at the reader, the Ranma cast then goes
back to Japan.  Now at first Ranma and Akane are still doing everything their
normal way.  You know, run of the mill stuff.  At some point, Ranma gives
Akane a blow job.  Yeah, you heard me right.  Now this is cool.  See, the same
way people love to read sex stories about virgin girls...that's how much I
enjoyed this section.  After all, Akane is practically a virgin in this fic.

One of the events leading up to the blow job was Akane getting all hot, you
know, for _it_.  She says, blushing and shaking (i think ^^) "Ranma, I'm...
hard."  Now that hit me really hard (no pun intended).  Akane is done _very_
well in this fic, even better than Ranma is in the earlier Nubin No Ichi fics.
All of that emotion and uncertainty is conveyed through her words and actions.
(And it didn't take 10 pages! ^_^)  Perhaps I was hit so hard by it because I
felt the same thing that Akane was feeling.

...No, you pervert, not the "hard" part.  I'm talking about the apprehension.
Having never read a "gay" fanfic, I was actually kind of _nervous_ about what
I would find (perhaps afraid of how I would react to it ^^).  So I could
identify _very_ well with Akane's feelings at this point.

*smile* Glad you liked it ... (Well, that part, anyway!)

The rest of the fic was okay.  Shampoo comes up with a plot and loses out big
as usual in FFML Fanfiction.  Ranma boofs Akane and that's that.  The final
sex scene didn't seem as descriptively written as in her other fics.  She was
kinda weak on the euphemisms and dirty talk.  It felt compressed as well...
as if she was trying to get through with it as soon as possible.  Oh well.

Well, it's more a lack of knowledge rather than trying to finish that part
ASAP ... it's rather hard for me to write about something that I have no
idea about, ne? (Even though guys seem to knock off fem-fem without even
blinking, even if the girls in the 'fic are actng nothing like real girls
would act in that situation! :p )

Still, this fic got to me so well that I just had to let the world know how
cool it was.  Of course, most of you on the FFML have read it already.  I
hadn't, because I was practically barred from it due to mail server problems.
(Thanks to Misa-chan for DCCing it to me on IRC.)

Thanks! ^_^

Kun-chan...