At 07:59 AM 2/11/97 -0800, you wrote:

Chris Willmore wrote:

    "Keiichi-sama," she sobbed.  She said the name like a prayer, an
appeal when all others proved ineffective -

I don't think I'd have her call him "-sama" myself.  She never went that 
far.  He always had her respect, but she never tried to prostrate
herself 
to him.  To me, it makes her sound like Ayeka from "Tenchi Myuo".

<snip>

told ya so, sweetie  ^_^

    A new Keiichi was waiting for her.

I think Chris meant Keiichi's soul was waiting for her...

Which makes this part more confusing to me than anything.  I would have 
given her a sweet, sad smile, once the tears had passed.  The last
sentence 
really puzzles me.  Do you mean she's off to grant another wish?  I
don't
get it, because Keiichi always struck me as someone very rare, a pure
heart
in a seemingly ordinary vessal.  I don't think there will be a 'new'
Keiichi.

-- 
Jim Nutley
Kunoranter First Class
(Humble Too!)
jnutley@lvnexus.net

misa ^^

Marisa Price
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