Subject: Re: An Alternate History of the Bubblegum Zone, Episode #12: Chapter , Five: May the Force be With You...
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 2/8/1997, 12:48 PM
To: Fanfiction ML

 On Wed, 29 Jan 1997 01:32:11 -0600 Hitomi Ichinohei wrote:

: Chapter Five:  May the Force be With You... 

: 	Sylia had expected the counter-blow and opted for a block flick
: with her little finger while going in for a Rat's Nest finger strike to
: the stomache.

"Stomach"


: Oneiko's incredulous look, ",. 
: I admit that I like putting on the suit and going out righting wrongs. 

What's with the punctuation after the opening quote?


: 	"And you've never had the heart to enforce the final rule have
: you?" 
: 	In a quiet, barely audible voice, Sylia replied, "No.  I couldn't
: bring myself to do it." 
: 	"Then you've learned the final lesson." 

We seem to have an abundance of teachers and mentors in this
series.  :)


: 	If anything good could be said about Ethan Hollister, it was that
: he was extremely through when it came to pursuing something, weather it be
: a person, philosophy, or goal.

"Thorough" and "whether"


: 	After all, it was what Hollister would have done. 

Which is, of course, a perfect indication what everybody else on
this planet would do. :)


Sebastian
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