Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML][Tenchi][the grandmother of all betas][prototype]Tenchi OAV 2.5 Chapter 1
From: "T. H. Tiger" <schell@interlog.com>
Date: 2/6/1997, 4:54 PM
To: Michael Chen , fanfic@fanfic.com

At 01:24 PM 2/6/97 -0500, Michael Chen wrote:
   "Tenchi!  Tenchi!  Tenchi!"  Ryoko called out to get Tenchi's
attention.  Her voice immediately went from urgent to overly cute.  "Do you
think you can get me out of this thing?"  Ryoko gave Tenchi the puppy dog
look, but it wasn't necessary.  Tenchi looked at the complicated array of
switches, and he selected one.  The restraints that were holding Ryoko gave
way, and a joyous space pirate ran out of her confinement.  The first thing
Ryoko did was to try to glomp onto Tenchi.

   Normally, Tenchi would have been polite and asked Ryoko to stay off,
but this time there was a serious matter at hand, and Tenchi gently pushed
away Ryoko so he could pick up Washu.  Envious, Ryoko followed Tenchi and
Washu out the door.

If I remember correctly [and being the hentai I am, I probably do.] is
Ryoko not naked in the OVA in this scene.




Im afraid I'm lousy a check lists so I'll just say I enjoyed this as a plot
outline.
You presented some interesting theories and I would like to see them
expanded on.
I think the time is ripe for some Tenchi stories as they are just now
releasing the tv series. Of course it varies from the OVA and may not even
have Lady Tokoma.


I really would like to see some more Tenchi Fics so if you are interested
I'll happily offer my services as a pre reader in which case I'll take your
draft apart as far as structure goes.