I enjoyed the story, quite a bit, except for one thing.  Right at the
end, after Hiro drives off the cliff, things go back to normal awfully
easy.  I don't think that after having such a long relationship with the
guy, Natsumi can just shrug off Hiro's death that easily.  I don't know,
maybe I'm just making the wrong assumptions here.

Even so, I liked the story.
-- 
 Magic Knight Kyone
--
"Do not meddle in the affairs of wizards, for they are subtle and
 quick to anger." --J.R.R. Tolkien                                
"Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and
 good with ketchup." --Anonymous