Ranma looked down to realize that another was about to happen.  The
force of the water's blast was carrying her out of the ring - and to
defeat.  She tried to swim against the force of the water, but it was a
useless gesture - Ranma vaguely remembered lessons from her physics
class.  You couldn't lift yourself off the ground, and you couldn't swim
up a waterfall.  The same principle - no leverage.

        Didn't know physics allowed a stream of water big enough
to allow a person to swim in to gush out of a simple fire hose.  ^_^  

If I do write this, it will be weeks from now, as I have other things to
work on first.  But the ideas have begun to pop into my head.

What do you think?  Should I write this?

        Beware the sting of the rose    
        Dark in bloom, black as the starless night
        Hooked claws reaching from the stem
        To pierce thy tender flesh
        And spill thy blood drop by drop
        
        Yet, handle thee carefully the rose of shadows
        Bring it carefully to thy nose
        And thou may yet reap the fruits of thy caution   

                -Excerpt from my thoughts on your fic idea