Subject: Careful Destiny Part Four (alpha eight)
From: "Todd Hill" <sysop@newberry.edu>
Date: 2/3/1997, 10:17 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Hello all,

After getting many requests for more stuff, I submit a particle for your
inspection.  I didn't put too much in this document submission due to time
constraints (I'm borrowing someone else's computer), and I don't remember
what I sent out last.

In any event, I'm still working on part four, and expect to hget it as close
to done as possible (for beta release, anyway) by KatsuCon.




[This scene takes place after the Ranma/Ranko bedroom scene]

      Akane  was  out  of her mind with grief.   She'd  just
killed her oldest sister with one of her newest attempts  at
cooking.  She looked at the stilled body of what used to  be
Kasumi  as it lay at her feet.  Akane was mired in  absolute
misery.
      `At  least  she didn't seem suffer long,' she  thought
with  a  touch  of  pity.  She reached out tentatively,  her
hands  shaking  uncontrollably as  she  went  to  touch  her
sister's  body.  Akane frowned as her fingers slid down  the
corpse's arm.  `Kasumi collapsed and died almost ten minutes
ago,'  she  thought.   `But her body still  feels  warm.   I
thought that-'   She suddenly shrieked and jumped back  when
Kasumi's  body  sat  up and pressed a  dainty  hand  to  its
forehead.
       "Owww..."  Kasumi  groaned,  having  trouble  sitting
upright  on the floor.  She looked at the trembling form  of
her terrified sister in confusion.  "Akane, what's wrong?"
      "  `What's  wrong?!'  I thought you were dead!"  Akane
shouted  hysterically.  "You ate some of my omelet, *yelled*
at me, then collapsed!"
      Kasumi blink-blinked for a second as hazy snippets  of
the  last fifteen minutes slowly came to her.  "Oh,  my!   I
did yell at you, didn't I?" she asked, thoroughly shocked at
herself.
      Akane  nodded  rapidly.  "When you  yelled  at  me,  I
thought  I'd  done something terrible to you.  You've  never
yelled  at  me  before, so I assumed that...  that  ...   OH
KASUUUUMIIIII!!!"  Akane fell to her knees  and  hugged  her
sister  tightly.  "I'm sorry!  I didn't mean to almost  kill
you!   I  won't  ever  try to cook again!   I  swear!"   The
emotional load of the situation became unmanageable  as  she
buried  her  head in Kasumi's chest and cried  like  a  lost
soul.
      Kasumi  patiently sat there and stroked Akane's  hair;
willing  to  give  her sister the time  she  needed  to  cry
herself  back  to  normal.   While Akane  blubbered,  Kasumi
pondered.   `Why  did I drop like that?' she  mused.   `I've
usually  had  a fairly good constitution when  it  comes  to
eating  her cooking.'  She looked up to the countertop,  the
surface  of which was just visible from her current position
on  the  floor.  Straining slightly, Kasumi craned her  neck
until  she espied the plate that Akane had in-hand  earlier.
It still had some of the `food' on it that Kasumi had tasted
before collapsing.
      `What  did  Akane  say  it was supposed  to  be?'  she
wondered.  A lingering flavor of it was still on her tongue.
`Hmmm...   Eggs,  mushrooms,  whole  milk,  pork,  and   ...
cheese?'  she  thought, mulling over what she could  discern
from  the  taste  in  her  mouth.   Kasumi  started  as  the
combination  of ingredients coalesced in her mind.   `That's
right!   Akane said that she was trying to cook an  omelet!'
She  looked critically at the plate again.  `It *looks* like
an omelet.  Could it be?!'
      "MY GOODNESS!" Kasumi shouted involuntarily, realizing
something  incredible had just happened.  Beyond  all  human
reasoning,  Akane had finally managed to get it  right.   `I
must  have  fainted due to shock!' she thought,  nodding  to
herself in understanding.
     Akane's head snapped up from her sister's tear-drenched
cleavage  at the shocking noise.  "What now?!  I  didn't  do
anything else to you, did I!?" she yelled hysterically.
      Kasumi  regained her composure and kissed  her  sister
gently  on  the  forehead.   The surprising  nature  of  the
gesture  caught Akane off-guard, silencing her yelling,  and
her  tears.   "Shhh,  Akane-chan," Kasumi  comforted.   "You
shouldn't be upset with yourself."
     "But I-" Akane protested, but was cut off.
      "No!" Kasumi said softly, but firmly.  "You didn't  do
anything  wrong.  In fact, you should be proud of  yourself.
You got it right," she enthused, running her fingers through
Akane's long hair soothingly.
      "Huh?"  Akane  asked in a tiny voice.  She  dared  not
believe what her oldest sister was telling her.  "Kasumi,  I
think  you're still suffering from the aftereffects  of  the
food I gave you-"
      "Akane,  hush!" she admonished lightly,  stopping  her
sister's  rant  in  mid-build-up.  "I'm not  suffering  from
anything  other than total shock."  Kasumi grimaced  as  she
realized  what a backhanded-compliment she'd just given  her
sister.
      Akane's  face showed just how confused  she  was.   "I
don't  understand, Kasumi.  You fainted dead away,  but  you
sound   like  you  actually  *enjoyed*  it."   She  frowned.
"You're just trying to make me feel better, that's it,"  she
concluded stubbornly.
      Kasumi sighed and brought herself to her feet, a  task
more  burdensome  than usual because her  sister  was  still
clinging  to her shoulders.  Once on her feet, she carefully
walked Akane back to the part of the counter where the  bowl
of  mixed ingredients sat.  Fairly sure that Akane was going
to  be okay, she wriggled herself free of her sister's grasp
and  faced the wok, which was still warmed and awaiting  the
application of ingredients.  "Only one way to find  out  for
sure,  Akane-chan," she declared as she poured some  of  the
ham, milk, mushroom, and egg mixture into the wok.
      Akane  instantly snapped out of her trance  and  moved
herself  closer to her sister.  Kasumi pulled her chan  out,
and  prepared to move the cooking egg mixture about  in  the
wok when Akane grabbed her hand.
      "No!   Not  yet.  You've got to wait a  little  longer
before  pushing  the  edges in and flipping  it.   It'll  be
undercooked, otherwise," Akane advised, almost as if it  had
been by rote.
     Kasumi cocked an eyebrow at her sister's advice.  "Why,
you're  right  Akane!  I almost folded  it  too  soon,"  she
admitted, acquiescing to her younger sister's sudden wisdom.
She  waited another ten seconds, then pushed the  edges  in,
cooking  the  remaining bits of egg that had pooled  in  the
center  of the omelet and gone untouched by the heat of  the
wok.   Cheese in hand, Akane waited until the right  moment,
then dropped some on top of the it.
      Kasumi  folded  half of the omelet on top  of  itself,
pressing lightly on the top with the back-edge of the  chan.
Less  than  half-a-minute  later, she  hefted  the  finished
product out of the wok and onto a plate.
      "Done," the oldest Tendo daughter declared.  "Now  for
the   moment  of  truth."   Reaching  for  a  set  of  clean
chopsticks, Kasumi picked up the plate and held it close  to
her face.  An enticing aroma wafted from the steaming plate,
calling to her to eat.  She gingerly dug the two sticks into
the  egg/dairy/pork combination and came away with  a  fair-
sized  chunk.  `Oh well, here goes everything,' she  thought
to herself as the whole thing passed her lips.
      Her eyes bulged as her mouth was assailed anew by  the
wonderfully rich taste of the omelet.  Spices and herbs that
had  gone unnoticed before filled her senses, adding  volume
to  the flavor of the dish.  Kasumi felt herself starting to
teeter  in  shock  once more, and forced herself  to  become
stable, lest Akane panic again.
     "It's wonderful!" Kasumi avowed after swallowing it.
       Akane's  eyes  shimmered  gloriously  in  the  bright
lighting  of the kitchen.  "Do you mean it, Sis?" she  asked
in hushed tones.
     Kasumi nodded, her cheeks bulging slightly, yet cutely,
with another mouthful of the omelet.
     Akane cried again, although this time it was with tears
of joy.  "Ohh, Kasumi!  You don't know how much it means for
me to hear you say that."  She clasped her hands together in
front of her face, her joy boundless.
      "It'f  quide  goot, Agane," Kasumi  acclaimed  as  she
chewed.
     Akane quit crying when she realized that her sister was
still  cramming  pieces of the omelet into her  mouth.   Joy
became  surprise;   she'd  never  seen  Kasumi  so  ravenous
before.  "You must've been hungry, Sis," Akane said  with  a
grin.
      Kasumi blushed, and quickly swallowed the remainder of
the  omelet.   She placed the empty plate on the countertop,
and  patted  her belly.  "I apologize, Akane.  I don't  know
what  came  over me, just then.  I don't normally  eat  that
much,  but  ...  I just couldn't resist.  I guess  it's  the
shock of the moment," she finished with a shrug.
      Akane's  giggles grew more and more boisterous,  until
she had to prop herself up against the countertop.  "I can't
believe  it!" she declared between short gasps.  "I actually
cooked  something  that  someone in my  family  ate  without
complaint!  This is too much!"
      Kasumi  smiled lovingly at her younger  sister.   "You
have  a lot to be proud of, Akane.  You've finally conquered
your cooking problems."  She winked conspiratorially.  "Care
to share your secret, little sister?"
      Akane  was  the one to blush this time.   "There's  no
secret  to  it, Kasumi," she hedged, avoiding  her  sister's
suddenly critical gaze.
      "Now  Akane,  I know it's been months since  you  last
tried  to  cook  for  us, but even  *I*  have  a  hard  time
believing that you became a master chef on your own in  such
a  *short*  period  of time," Kasumi said critically.   "Now
fess up!"
      Akane blew her breath out loudly.  "Okay, okay."   She
reached  her hands back and vaulted up, plopping her  behind
on  the countertop.  "You remember how Kuno-ch ... Kuno  had
me over to his house on the weekends?"  Kasumi nodded.
      "Well,"  Akane continued, "it happened  early  in  our
relationship.  After trying to cook a meal for him one  day,
and  failing  miserably, he ordered  me  to  attend  cooking
lessons at the Kuno mansion."
     "Akane!" Kasumi said in a shocked voice.
      "Yes.  I was forced to learn how to cook under his own
personal  chef."  She paused, killing any tears before  they
could  surface.   Akane  looked into  Kasumi's  eyes,  which
seemed a bit sad to her, and continued her story before  she
succumbed  to her sister's dolor.  "I've actually known  how
to  cook for about three months;  I've just never felt  like
doing  it  after I learned how.  Well, in reality, I  didn't
cook  afterwards because I didn't want that jerk,  Kuno,  to
have  the satisfaction of knowing that I'd benefited because
of him."  Akane flushed with embarrassment.  "Also, I wasn't
sure  that  I  could cook well unless I had a chef  hovering
over me."
     Akane pointed to the bowl of omelet mix.  "Thierry, the
Kuno  family  chef,  taught me how to  cook  European  meals
because  he was French.  But I also managed to learn  a  few
traditional Japanese dishes along the way."  Akane smiled to
her  sister.  "I didn't push him too hard to teach me those,
though, since I didn't want to learn them from him."
      She  hopped  off  of the counter and slipped  her  arm
around  Kasumi's waist.  "That's because I wanted  to  learn
all  of that from you.  That is, if you'd teach them to  me,
Kasumi."
      Kasumi's  cheeks reddened considerably, and there  was
suddenly  moisture  shimmering in her eyes.   "Oh,  my  baby
sister!   I'd  *love*  to," she declared  in  a  tear-choked
voice.   Try  as  she  might,  she  couldn't  withhold   the
upwelling  of  emotion  kindled by  Akane's  story  and  her
plaintive  request.  "I love you, Akane-chan, and I'm  very,
*very* proud of you."
      Akane didn't resist as she felt herself be pulled into
a  hug by her oldest sister.  The two sisters held onto each
other  gently.  "Thanks, Kasumi.  I promise to  work  hard!"
Akane vowed.
     Kasumi withdrew from the hug and caressed Akane's tear-
streaked  face.   "I  know you will,  little  sister."   She
sniffled,  and regained her composure.  Cinching  her  apron
strings  tight, Kasumi cracked her knuckles.  "First thing's
first;   let's  get breakfast cooked for everyone.   If  *I*
could  enjoy your omelets so much, I'm sure that  Daddy  and
Nabiki will just love them."
      Akane beamed as she followed Kasumi's lead and started
portioning out more ingredients to mix together in the bowl.
She  bent to her task obediently, careful not to slip up  as
she followed her mental cookbook closely.  She couldn't wait
to  see  the  looks on her father's and Nabiki's faces  when
they had a sample of her work.

                            ****

      Genma  brought his massive hand up to  his  brow,  and
mopped  off the sweat that had already formed there.  `Damn!
Not ten minutes out of the bath, and I'm already sweating as
if I'd been in the training hall for hours.'  He looked over
to  his  son,  who was eerily quiet.  That wasn't  what  had
Genma  frowning, though.  Ranma was carrying his  sister  on
his back, and he hadn't even broken a sweat yet.
     "How long have we got until we get there, slave?" Ranko
asked her brother amidst a giggle.
      Ranma snorted at his sister's playful banter.  He  was
about  to  respond  with something equally  witty  when  his
father spoke.
      "I  can't believe how hot it already is!  It's nowhere
near  summer, but I'm still frying like squid on a hibachi."
Genma  groaned and moved his house-building cargo  from  one
shoulder  to  another.   "I  also  thought  it  was   damned
convenient that Nodoka had something to take care of *right*
as we left.  It wouldn't have hurt her to carry some of this
stuff, instead of forcing me to lug it around in this heat."
      Ranma  shook  his head while his father  continued  to
drone  on  about  the  unfairness of  life.   Meanwhile,  he
carried  the soft, yet weighty burden of his sister  on  his
back without complaint.
      Ranko  seemed to be thinking along the same lines  her
brother  was,  but  she didn't keep her mouth  shut.   "Pop,
wouldja  quit whining?  The walk isn't that long.   Besides,
we're  going to get messy anyway by doin' all that  work  on
Mr. Tendo's dojo, right?"
     "Don't *you* talk to *me* like that, young lady!" Genma
began, but recoiled as Ranko employed her lung power.
      "Don't treat me like a whiny little girl!   Why, if my
ankle wasn't messed up, I'd kick your lard ass from here  to
Hong  Kong!"   She  tensed her thighs in anger,  unknowingly
squeezing  Ranma  in the ribs and causing him  to  lose  his
wind.   Ranko  felt him start to slow down, and  immediately
loosened  her grip when she realized what she was  doing  to
him.
     "Oops!  Sorry, Ranma!" she apologized.
     "That's my girl!" Genma said loudly.  "A true man among
women if I ever saw one!"
      Ranma fought hard to keep from stumbling, or otherwise
succumbing  to a severe bout of laughing.  Ranko, meanwhile,
had  to  put  her arms around his neck to keep from  falling
off.  "Watch what you call me, old fart!  Just because I can
whip someone's ass doesn't mean that I'm not feminine!"  She
flexed  her  arms  slightly, but caught herself  before  she
choked Ranma into unconsciousness.
      Once Ranma had resumed normal breathing, he craned his
neck  up  to look at his sister.  "You know, you're becoming
too  dangerous to carry around!  Just how much do you  enjoy
choking the life out of me?"
      Ranko  blushed and shrugged her shoulders.  "I said  I
was sorry."
      Before he could respond, his father chimed in.   "Stop
complaining,  boy!  You're acting like a whining  old  lady.
That's not the path..."
      "...of  a true martial artist," Ranma completed  in  a
perfect  deadpan.  "Yadda yadda yadda.  Spare me the  spiel,
pop.  It ain't nothin' I haven't heard before."
     "Hey, Pop," Ranko countered, "what do you call what you
were  just  doing  then... old lady?"  She  and  Ranma  both
laughed at that, which sent the two of them stumbling about.
      Genma  snorted indignantly.  "I was only pointing  out
the weather conditions for the day," he harrumphed.
      Ranma  looked  up  to his sister's flushed  face,  and
winked  conspiratorially.  "Yeah, right,"  he  whispered  to
her.
      Ranko giggled lightly, then flashed to panic.  "Ranma,
look  out  for  that..."  It was too late,  however,  as  he
walked, sister-first, into a telephone pole with a metallic-
and-bone  sounding *CLANG*.  He wound up flat  on  his  butt
with  his  sister  clinging tightly  to  his  upright  back.
"Geez,  why dont'cha watch where you're going?" she  snapped
irritably.
      Ranma  flushed  at that.  "Quit being a  shoulder-back
driver, Ranko!"
      Both  quit  their bickering session in  mid-stride  as
Genma's  howling laughter caught their attention.   "Martial
artists  ...  colliding with a ... telephone  pole  in  b...
broad daylight!  HAHAHAHAHA!!"  The siblings of pain seethed
in  silence  as their father doubled over in laughter.   The
scene carried on, unchallenged, for a few minutes until he'd
run out of breath.
      "Ohh,  I needed that," a calmed Genma declared  as  he
picked up his dropped burden of construction tools and parts
and walked to his felled children.
      "Ranma,  could you put me down now?" Ranko  suggested.
"I  think  we'll do better if you'll let me walk by  myself,
okay?"  She underscored her intent by loosening the grip she
had around his neck.
      Knowing that she would hit the ground hard if she  let
go  first, Ranma unhooked his arms from around Ranko's legs,
and forced himself up to a standing position.  Something  in
his  back  disagreed  with him, however,  as  he  stood  up.
Stifling  a  groan  of  pain, he managed  to  keep  it  from
showing.   `Damn!  Hurt my back.  Hope it doesn't  interfere
with the work on the Dojo,' he hoped urgently.
      Ranko  hauled herself to her feet, and gingerly tested
her  sore  ankle.   She winced slightly  at  the  pain,  but
acknowledged that it was nowhere near as bad as it had  been
the day before.  Emboldened by her fast healing, she put all
of her weight down on it, and whimpered in pain.
      "Ranko,  you'd  better climb back  on,"  Ranma  stated
flatly.  "You're still not up to walking on your own."
      She  stared at him defiantly and crossed her  arms  in
front  of  her chest.  "No!" she shouted, shaking her  head.
"I'll walk on my own, thank you very much."
      Ranma groaned in frustration, and advanced toward her.
Ranko  hobbled  away from him as he approached.   "Stop  it!
I'll  damn  well  go  on my own, and you'll  like  it!"  she
declared.
     "You stubborn tomboy!  I..." Ranma yelled angrily, then
shouted in surprise as he ducked a flying kick aimed at  his
head.  "What'd ya do that for?!" he exclaimed.
       Pivoting  on  her  good  foot,  Ranko  moderated  her
breathing, and somehow managed to keep her balance.   "Watch
your  mouth,  big brother.  I don't like being called  that!
I'm *not* a guy!"
     Ranma rolled his eyes and shook his head, dismissing it
before  the  argument grew.  "Whatever...  You  still  can't
walk  on  that foot!" he shot back, pointing at her bandaged
ankle.
     "Fine!" she said hotly.  "Then you can hand me that old
broom over there."  She pointed to something nestled between
a  group  of  garbage  cans.  Ranma reluctantly  agreed  and
pulled the item from the garbage and went back to her.
      Taking  it in hand, Ranko tossed it in the  air,  then
jumped  up  with  her good foot.  With  a  loud  shout,  she
chopped  the  end off of the broom with her hand,  and  took
hold  of  the  modified  stick.  She used  it  to  stabilize
herself as she landed.  Without even looking behind her, she
knew  that  the rest of the broom had landed in one  of  the
nearby  trash  cans.   "Perfect!   Nothing  but  can!"   she
gloated, bowing.
      Ranma and Genma both kept their expressions neutral as
they  watched her land.  They were impressed by  what  she'd
just  done,  but that was tempered somewhat by  her  caustic
attitude.  Ranko scowled at the lack of adulation  from  her
audience  and walked between them.  "Jealous?"  she  chided,
mocking both of them with her tone.
     "Showoff," Ranma said, not-unkindly.
      Ranko  stuck  her  tongue out at  him  playfully,  and
avoided his half-hearted swipe.
      "Come  on, you two.  Let's get back on the road before
we're  late,"  Genma urged.  Ranma nodded and  followed  his
father's  lead  towards the Tendo Dojo once more,  his  eyes
glued protectively to Ranko as they walked side-by-side.

                            ****

     Nodoka smiled to herself as she placed one last item in
a  basket sitting on the counter.  `There!' she thought with
satisfaction after looking upon the large selection of  food
that  she'd  prepared and placed within the  basket.   `That
should do it.  Now if only I could keep Ranma and Genma away
from  it once I get there, then Soun and his children should
be able to enjoy it.'
      She  laughed at the notion of herself having to defend
the basket from her husband and son.  `I'd probably have  to
use  my  sword  to  ward  them off.'   She  shook  her  head
dismissively, and checked over the basket's contents  again.
`Got to make sure...'
      A  knock at the door interrupted her inventory of  the
basket.   Folding  the  tops of the  cloth  liner  over  the
contents,  Nodoka left the basket in the kitchen and  walked
to the front door.
      "Just  a  minute, please," she said as she approached.
Sliding the door open, she smiled as she saw Sato and Hikaru
standing at the doorway.
     "Sato!  Hikaru!  Good morning!" she said, greeting them
warmly.
     "Good morning Mrs. Saotome," Hikaru replied in an Eddie
Haskellish tone.  "Sato and I were here to see Ranma."
      "I'm  sorry, boys.  You just missed him.  He  and  his
father  have gone to a ... friend's place on the other  side
of Nerima."
     Hikaru Gosunkugi barely hid a look of frustration.  But
before  he  could ask where Ranma had gone, Sato  spoke  up.
"Mrs. Saotome, is Ranko at home?"
     She smiled knowingly at Sato, and didn't miss the angry
glare that Hikaru shot his companion.  Nodoka shook her head
slowly.  "No, Sato.  She went with Ranma and her father.  In
fact, you both caught me just as I was getting ready to head
there myself."
      Hikaru's  eyes  brightened, and he immediately  jumped
upon  the  opportunity.  "Is it alright if we go  with  you,
Mrs. Saotome?"
      Nodoka  frowned inwardly.  Things were tenuous  enough
between  her  husband and Soun.  Bringing  uninvited  guests
might  make  things more complicated.  `On the  other  hand,
extra workers might be appreciated...' she considered, as  a
plan took form in her mind.  "Do you two strapping young men
know  how to handle construction tools?" she asked in a very
pleasant voice.
     Both boys were jarred slightly by her question.  "Umm..
Uh, yeah" Hikaru stammered, while Sato merely nodded.
      "Good," she concluded, smirking to herself.  "You both
can  join  me, then.  Wait here while I get my  things,  and
then we'll be off."
      They  nodded to her, and remained at the doorway while
she  disappeared  into the kitchen.  Once  she  was  out  of
earshot, Hikaru elbowed Sato hard in the ribs.
      "Oww,  shit!   What'd you do that for?"  Sato  hissed,
rubbing his violated midsection.
      "What's the big idea about asking for Ranko,  huh?   I
already  told  you that she's mine!" Hikaru  whispered  back
angrily.
      Sato, who stood slightly taller than his friend,  rose
to  his  full height of five feet, ten inches in the doorway
and  looked down at his aggressor.  "I wasn't going  to  ask
her  out,  jerkweed!"  he whispered with  equal  venom.   "I
figured that since Ranma was gone, we might be able  to  get
the answers we needed from his sister."
      "Oh."   Hikaru calmed down considerably at that point,
and apologized.  "Sorry for hitting you like that, Sato.   I
just  get  really paranoid when someone else talks about  my
Ranko-chan.   She's  started to show some  interest  in  me,
and..."   He broke off his whispered conversation  with  his
companion  as  Nodoka reappeared, carrying  a  rather  large
basket in one arm, and a long, wrapped bundle in the other.
      "You  two ready to go?" she asked cheerfully once  she
stood before them.
      "Yes  ma'am," they chorused as they stepped back  from
the door, giving her room to exit.
      Ever  the  gentleman, Sato tapped Nodoka on  the  arm.
"Would you like me to carry that for you, Mrs. Saotome?"
      "Why,  yes!  Thank you, Sato-kun.  That would be  very
nice,"  she said as she unlimbered the basket and one-handed
it to him.
      Sato  smiled as he took hold of the handle.  The smile
turned  to  immense strain, however, when Nodoka pulled  her
hand  away and the full weight of its contents came to bear.
Teetering  on the edge of collapse, Sato strained  to  right
himself  and  keep  hold  of  the  extremely  heavy  basket.
`Geez!' he thought in anguish.  `What's she got in here?   A
car?'   Sweat  beads formed on his head  as  he  hefted  the
object  up  to  elbow-level and cradled  it  to  his  chest.
"Ready when you are, Mrs. Saotome," he grunted.
      Through  a  supreme  effort of will,  she  managed  to
contain her laughter.  With only a casual smile gracing  her
face,  she  nodded her approval and stepped ahead  of  Sato.
"Let's  be on our way, then, boys," she urged, as she  began
walking.
      Hikaru  shot  Sato a sour look and trotted  up  beside
Nodoka.   "Mrs. Saotome, I can carry the other  package  for
you,  if you wish," he offered brightly.  He held his  hands
out to her, anticipating that she'd say yes.
      She reflexively pulled the item to her chest, and away
from his reaching hands.  "I'm afraid not, Hikaru.  This  is
an  heirloom that I hold very dear.  I really don't ever let
anyone else touch it."
      "Oh,  okay,  Mrs. Saotome."  Crestfallen, Hikaru  fell
back in behind her and walked beside his struggling friend.
      The  intent behind the gesture was not lost on Nodoka,
though.   `Nice  try, son,' she thought  to  herself  wryly.
`Trying to curry favor with me to get to my daughter is  one
of  the oldest tricks in the book.'  A gleam appeared in her
eyes.   `But,  I'd rather not let you date  her,'  she  told
herself.   `You're  nothing  but trouble  for  my  daughter,
Hikaru Gosunkugi.'
      She  clenched the bundle tightly once more as her mind
shifted  gears.   Nodoka found herself  wondering  what  had
prompted  her  to  bring it along.  `Maybe  I'm  just  being
paranoid,'  she told herself.  `But I can't help  but  think
that  there's going to be some sort of trouble at the  Tendo
Dojo today.  I can *feel* it.  I just hope that I don't have
to  use  this,' she prayed, her fingers sliding up and  down
the   wrapped  length  of  her  ancient  sword.    Her  pace
quickened as a sudden sense of urgency spurred her  to  walk
faster.  `Oh dear!  I just realized that Genma and Soun will
be  meeting  without me there!  I just hope that  everything
begins on a good note!'

                            ****

      A  bleary-eyed Nabiki shambled into the  dining  area.
Her  father  was already seated at the table with  paper  in
hand, and a steaming mug of tea at his side.  "Good morning,
daddy," Nabiki yawned, unable to conceal her lethargy.   Her
morning  bath had served not only to clean herself off,  but
wound up making her drowsy as well.
      "Ahh,  good  morning, Nabiki!  I'm glad  to  see  that
you're finally downstairs," he said from behind his paper.
       She  sniffed,  and  caught  the  aroma  of  something
delicious  wafting from the kitchen.  "Mmmm.   Smells  good.
What's Kasumi cooking for breakfast?"
      Soun  shrugged his paper.  "I have no idea.  I vaguely
remember  smelling something like it before, but it  escapes
me  for  the  moment.  Regardless of what it is, it  *seems*
delicious."   He peeked his head around from the  paper  and
scanned  the table.  "Where's Akane?  I thought she might've
come down with you."
     Nabiki shook her head tiredly.  "I don't think she's up
yet."
     Soun nodded and returned to his reading.  Less than two
minutes  later, a vibrant Kasumi walked out of  the  kitchen
bearing  the  fruits  of her morning labor.   "Breakfast  is
ready," she announced as she laid various items down on  the
table.
      Nabiki drew her face close to her plate, which  had  a
folded  yellow thing on it.  She sniffed at it  tentatively,
and heard her stomach growl its approval.  "Kasumi, what  is
this?"  she  asked  in her uniquely droll,  yet  inquisitive
voice, stabbing a finger at the dish.
     "Oh, it's an omelet," she replied brightly.  Completing
the table settings, Kasumi stood up and clasped her hands in
front of her.  "W...  I decided to try a western recipe  for
breakfast this morning."
      Soun  immediately folded his paper, and looked at  his
plate  with longing.  "Oh, Kasumi!  You're such a  dear!   I
haven't  had  an  omelet in *years.*"  He rubbed  his  hands
together,   relishing  his  upcoming  feast.    "It   smells
fantastic!"
      Latent  worry crossed Nabiki's face.  Akane wasn't  at
the  table,  and Kasumi was suddenly getting inventive  with
the  meals.  "Sis, where's Akane?" she asked sweetly,  which
was  in  contrast with the sharp, inquisitive  look  on  her
face.
      Kasumi  blinked  innocently  and  walked  towards  the
kitchen.   "I'll go get her in a minute, Nabiki.  Why  don't
you   start  eating  without  her?"  she  suggested  as  she
disappeared from view.
      As if on cue, Akane bounded into the room with a smile
on  her  face.  "Good morning, Daddy.  Nabiki." she enthused
as  she  took  her  place  at  the  table.   "Mmmm.   Smells
wonderful!" she said as she took her chopsticks in hand.
      Satisfied  that  she  wasn't  about  to  get  Ptomaine
poisoning, Nabiki began eating.  "Not bad for western food,"
she  admitted  grudgingly as she wolfed  down  progressively
larger pieces.
      "Good  morning, Akane.  I trust you slept well?"  Soun
replied.
     Akane tried to come up with a quick evasion when Kasumi
re-entered  the  room.  "Ahh, good!  Everyone's  here!"  her
older sister announced.
      Soun  took that as a sign to begin eating.  With  fast
movements, he sectioned off a bit of the steaming omelet and
popped  it in his mouth.  "Oh, Kasumi!  It's wonderful!"  he
said  earnestly  before he started shoveling  the  remaining
pieces into his mouth.
      "Really?!" Kasumi and Akane chorused.  Coincidentally,
a  loud thunderclap from the approaching storm sounded  just
outside the house.
      Soun and Nabiki stopped in mid-chew as a spine-numbing
chill  worked  its way from their stomachs  and  crawled  up
their backs.  Placing her chopsticks down, Nabiki turned  to
her younger sister and stared her right in the eye.  "Akane,
why  should  *you* be so interested in how this meal  turned
out?"
     "Oh, that's because she cooked breakfast this morning!"
Kasumi piped up before Akane could answer.
      Panic-stricken, Nabiki looked like she  was  about  to
bolt  from the room.  Soun, meanwhile, had gone stiff  as  a
statue,  and  snapped  his chopsticks between  his  fingers.
Neither spoke.
      "There!   You see Akane?  I told you they'd love  it!"
Kasumi said positively as she walked back into the kitchen.

                            ****

      "Ahh,  there it is!" Ranma exclaimed excitedly as  the
gates  of  the Tendo property wall loomed before  them.   He
quickened  his  pace  to  a  trot, his  earlier  nervousness
replaced by a welcome enthusiasm.
      "So  it  is, son," Genma shouted to Ranma's  departing
form.
      `Waitaminute!'  Ranko thought  in  sudden  alarm.   `I
recognize  this  place!  This is where  Ranma  got  his  ass
stomped  almost  three weeks ago.'  Her eyes glanced  across
the  far reaching wall bordering the one visible side of the
Tendo's  place,  looking for hidden dangers among  the  tall
trees  growing  within  the bounds  of  the  Tendo  complex.
Growling  at  herself, Ranko forced herself  to  calm  down.
`Ranma  should be okay.  After all, this is the place  where
he's  been  living for awhile.  Well, close enough'   Still,
she quickened her pace to catch up with him.
      She  hobbled  next to her brother  just  as  he  began
pushing  against the tall wooden gates marking the  entrance
to  the  Tendo  gardens and house.  Ranko  placed  her  hand
against  his  arm, stopping him momentarily.   "Hey,  Ranma.
You'll  be okay, honest!  I'm gonna be at your side whenever
you need me, understand?" she whispered.
      Seeing his father fast approaching their position,  he
refrained from hugging her, and merely covered her hand with
his while mouthing `thanks' and winking.
      "Well,  they're  probably waiting on us,  Son,"  Genma
said,  a  smile plastered on his face.  His false humor  was
easy  to  see  through for the two young Saotomes,  however.
They  were all too aware of their father's anxiousness,  and
the  very  good reasons for it.  They were reasons that  had
the two alert, but not nervous.
      Steadying  his  hand,  Genma reached  out  and  pushed
against the unlocked gate.

                            ****

      A  much chastened Nabiki and Soun looked up sheepishly
at  Akane  from their seats at the table as she  stood  over
them, smirking victoriously.
     "Sis..."
     "Akane..."
      The two nervous eaters looked at each other, then fell
silent  for a moment.  Soun spoke again before Nabiki  could
get the nerve to do so.  "Akane, please accept your father's
humblest apologies.  I was reacting out of habit."  He  took
her  hand gingerly in his.  "I truly enjoyed it.  In  fact,"
he  looked  down  hungrily to his  empty  plate,  "I'd  like
another one."
      "Me  too!" Nabiki piped up quickly, holding her  empty
plate up over her head.
      With  the beginnings of grateful tears forming in  her
eyes,  Akane smiled proudly.  "Thanks.  I'd be glad to  cook
another one for each of you!"  She enthusiastically took the
plates  from  both of them and walked back to  the  kitchen.
Some clattering of utensils soon followed.  "Now where did I
put the bleach?" she was heard to ask in the distance.
      Soun  and  Nabiki paled slightly, and made a  move  to
stand from the table when Akane poked her head back into the
room.   "Gotcha!" she said brightly, pulling her  head  back
into the kitchen just in time to avoid getting smacked by  a
small  pillow  that had just been used to  comfort  Nabiki's
shapely posterior.
      "Suckers!" Akane added from around the safety  of  the
kitchen wall.
      "Well,  at least she's in a good mood, today,"  Nabiki
quipped as she stole her sister's pillow, to replace the one
she'd launched at Akane, and tucked it under her behind.
      "Yes,"  her father agreed.  "Akane seems to be  a  bit
happier  than I've seen her in quite awhile."  He smiled  to
himself.   `Perhaps this day's going to  go  better  than  I
expected,' Soun thought light-heartedly.
      It  wasn't  long  before the smell of freshly  cooking
omelets filled the room again, entrancing both occupants  of
the table.  "I can hardly believe it," Nabiki admitted.  "My
youngest  sister can actually cook.  Hmmmph!  I wonder  what
could top news like *that* today?"
      Soun was about to respond to that question when Kasumi
walked  in.  "Father, the outer gate is opening.  Our guests
have arrived," she announced quickly and quietly.  Then  she
placed  two  steaming plates of omelets on the table,  along
with  another  tray  of  them  and  some  extra  plates  and
chopsticks.
      "Akane  felt that we should cook the remaining omelets
instead   of  letting  them  go  to  waste,"  Kasumi   said,
indicating  the extras sitting on a larger plate.   "I  also
brought  out two extra plates in case our guests might  want
some  of  them."  She smiled to them sweetly.  "Now  eat  up
before  they  get  cold,"  she  cautioned  lightly  as   she
disappeared into the kitchen.
     Nabiki's curiosity had hit a peak at the mention of the
mystery guests, and she was up on her feet.  But before  she
could  sprint from the room and out of the house, her father
seized  her hand.  "Nabiki, don't be rude.  You and  I  have
omelets to finish."  He looked her in the eye.  "Remember?"
      Sulking slightly, Nabiki sank back down on the cushion
and  draped  her arms across her chest.  "Whatever,  daddy."
She  picked up her chopsticks, but didn't have the heart  to
touch the omelet.  She just wasn't hungry anymore.
      Soun,  however, dug into his furiously, finishing  the
large  egg  morsel in record time.  Then  he  stood  up  and
walked to the doorway separating them from the outside.   He
watched intently through slats in the door as the wall  gate
swung open, his face unreadable.

                            ****

     Genma was the first one into the gate.  Standing inside
it,  he  brought  his head around in a slow sweep,  and  was
taken  aback  by  the sight of the grounds  in  Spring-time.
"Why,  it's  just  as I remember it," he  said  softly,  his
glasses growing a little misty.
      Ranko was not far behind her father as he cleared  the
gate  and  began walking down the path leading  towards  the
house.   "Whoa!" she whispered in awe, taking in the sights.
"This is a *nice* place."  Ranko was mindful of her steps as
she walked on the uneven surface, inching her way closer  to
the house.
      Genma  kept  a slow, steady pace forward so  he  could
absorb as much of the tranquil grounds as possible.  He  was
only halfway to the house when an angered shout stopped  him
dead in his tracks.
      "What kind of man do you think you are?!" a deep voice
bellowed from inside.
      Genma grinned to himself nastily, and threw his burden
of  supplies down on the ground at his side.  "The  kind  of
man  who  knows  how to fight!" he yelled  back  with  equal
fervor, adopting a fighting stance.
      The door to the house slid open, revealing a red-faced
Soun.   He  glared at Genma for a second from the  porch  in
silence, his arms crossed against his chest.  He didn't stay
there  for long, however, as he leapt into the air, charging
right at Genma.  "And how will you fight?" he challenged  as
he drew closer.
      The  current sensei of the Saotome School of  Anything
Goes  flexed his arms brutishly.  "I'll fight-," he  shouted
at  the  top of his lungs.  Following Soun's airborne track,
Genma jumped up to meet him.
      "Pop!" Ranko shrieked in alarm as she watched a battle
between two old friends boil up in front of her.

                            ****

     "You don't have to clean all of this by yourself, Sis,"
Kasumi admonished as she re-entered the kitchen.  "After all
the  work  you  did to cook breakfast for us, you  could  at
least let me help."
     Akane, humming happily to herself, made a small step to
the right to make space for her sister at the sink.  "Be  my
guest,  Kasumi-chan," she replied sweetly.   "I  don't  mind
cleaning  up, though.  One of the other things chef  Thierry
taught me was that I had to be responsible for the messes  I
made  in  the kitchen.  He told me that `Cooking  should  be
pursued  with abandon if it is to be done properly.   But  a
good  cook shouldn't abandon the kitchen in the aftermath.'"
She  laughed  at that.  "Thierry always did have  a  way  of
making me understand."
      Kasumi smiled to herself.  Her sister had changed more
than  she'd thought.  "Well, he's right about not abandoning
the  kitchen  after cooking.  I'd debate the first  part  of
that  statement, though," she said as she picked up a  plate
and began to wash.
      "Akane,  did daddy tell you about what we're doing  in
the dojo today?"
      She  grew slightly nervous at her sister's mention  of
the  dojo.   "Umm,  no Kasumi.  What's  up?"  she  asked  as
innocuously  as  possible.  `I hope  this  isn't  about  the
door,' she added to herself.
     "Well, daddy told us last night that he was having some
friends over this morning to help with fixing up the  Dojo,"
Kasumi said quickly.
      Akane  breathed a sigh of relief.  "Ahh, that's  good.
It  looks  like  a  bomb had gone off in  there,"  she  said
offhandedly, then something else Kasumi mentioned caught  up
with  her.  "Waitaminute!  Did you say that they were coming
here *today?*"
      Kasumi  nodded, as she energized her cleaning.   "Yes.
In fact, they're here now."
     "NOW?" Akane asked incredulously
     "Yes," Kasumi replied placidly.
     "WHO?"
      They're good friends of."  Kasumi's voice trailed  off
at the sound of her father yelling.
       "Oh   no!    Was  that  a  battlecry?"  Akane   asked
incredulously as she dropped her dishwashing burden back  in
the sink.
      Kasumi's  stomach  sank  as she  heard  more  yelling.
Whatever  it  was had her father absolutely  *furious.*   He
hadn't sounded that angry since that day of that ugly  phone
call.   "No." she cried, although it almost came  out  as  a
whimper.  She and Akane tore from the kitchen at full  speed
and dashed into the dining room.
     Scrambling across the room, they got there just in time
to  see  their  father leaping off of  the  porch  and  head
towards some bigger man dressed in an off-white gi.  The two
men snarled at each other as they charged.  Kasumi chanced a
glance  at where she last saw Nabiki, and couldn't find  her
anywhere.  More commotion from outside forced her to  ignore
the  question of her sister's whereabouts and turn  back  to
the fight.
      "Kasumi,  what's going on?!" Akane shrieked helplessly
from  her  sister's side as she watched  her  father  and  a
stranger battle in front of her ancestral home.

                            ****

     "What the hell?!" Ranma shouted at the top of his lungs
as  he  blasted  through the open gates and raced  into  the
compound,  almost  plowing over a motionless  Ranko  in  the
process.  His guts turned ice cold as he watched his  father
and  Soun speeding towards each other, a murderous  look  on
both of their faces.
     He caught a slight glimpse of Akane and Kasumi standing
on  the  porch on the other side of the brawl.  Then  Nabiki
joined  the  two,  camera in hand.  All  of  girls  appeared
horrified,  which  was a painful thing  for  Ranma  to  see,
especially  on  Akane's face.  Despite the twinges  of  pain
rushing  through his back, he prepared himself to  intervene
in the fight, no matter the cost.
      Soun  and  Genma  met in the air, their  arms  closing
tightly  around  each other in a death embrace.   "We  fight
with  the honor of a true martial artist!" they chorused  as
they landed on their feet, face-to-face on the walkway.
     Stunned, Ranma checked his attempt to leap at them, and
awaited their next move.
     The two grown men broke out into body-shaking laughter,
and hugged each other again, warmly this time.
      "Soun, you old rascal!" Genma declared, standing  away
from  Soun  and  clapping  him on  the  back.   "I'd  almost
forgotten that old training mantra!"
      Wiping  tears of laughter from his eyes, Soun returned
the  pounding.   "Ahh, Genma my friend!  I couldn't  resist.
So  how  have  you been?" Soun asked as they disengaged  and
walked  towards  the house, their conversation  lowering  in
volume and becoming ebullient and friendly.
       Ranma,   along   with  everyone  else,   facefaulted.
Recovering  quickly, he didn't attempt to  hide  his  anger.
"You could've warned us that you were going to do that,  old
man!"
     "Yeah!" Ranko added hotly.
     Genma glanced back over his shoulder and laughed at his
irritated children.  "Quit complaining, you two.   Now  come
on  inside.   We have a lot of work to do!"   With  that  he
disappeared  inside, walking right past a  stunned  trio  of
young ladies.
      "Damn!  Could've given me a heart attack!" Ranma swore
under his breath.
      "No shit," Ranko chimed in as she hobbled over next to
him.  "Who would've thought that they'd play around with our
minds like that?" she demanded sourly.  They stewed together
in  silence for a minute or two as they allowed their hearts
to calm down.
     "Well, let's go inside, Ranko," Ranma said as he guided
her towards the house and the Tendo sisters.

[to be continued...]

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