On Sat, 1 Feb 1997, Gary Kleppe wrote:

I have a *really* hard time believing that even Nabiki could stir up an
international incident over this. It would be more believable to me if
she were to play upon Cologne's honor. If Amazon laws *were* to apply,
then Cologne's interference with Ranma would clearly be in violation of
them, so her honor might compel her to promise Nabiki to stay away. 

I's not actually unbelievable, especially given the relationships that
Japanese have to one another.

A simple explanation of what is happening to certain area representatives
would be enough to cause this type of reaction by all the Japanese people.

I like the concept of this fic, and the writing is top-notch, but I'm
starting to feel a little disappointed by the direction this story
might be taking. Things are going way too well for Ranma, IMHO. I'd
like to see more emphasis on the problems that come from her
exploration of her feminine side, and how this compounds the other
troubles in her life. I really would rather not see the now-feminine
Ranma going around solving problems for all the other characters.
Ranma and company are most interesting to me when their lives are made
difficult, and I'd like to see that in this story.

Well?

It's only the first day, of course things are going relatively well.

The next day and the rest of the month and beyond...

Well, Kodachi doesn't always head over to Ranma's school, but hearing
Tatewaki rave?!?

She'll put in an appearance sooner or later...

Hitomi

Ichinohei Hitomi
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"The beginings of wisdom is the ability to always ask questions."