Well, I finished touching up the little details that will make
Shiro less powerful. The deal is...he can only call up the energy to his
hands and arms, rather than any point on his body. That way, there's not
automatic "zap where he's hit" to make a fight end too quickly. That way,
people without ki attacks still stand an excellent chance against him in a
fight. (Speaking of ki attack, I've decided that ki projectiles won't hurt
him as badly physically as with another person, but he will get incredibly
nauseous whe hit.) Also, Ryouga is not going to be as friendly towards
Shiro (though he's also not going to pick any fights with Shiro...yet).
Erm.... What else? Not too much, I guess. I'll be reposting the revised
chapters (only 1 and 2, still--haven't had any ideas, really, for the
further chapters) next.

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