On Fri, 31 Jan 1997 13:35:14 -0800 (PST), bryan gooing
<remmey@hotmail.com> wrote:

this is a fan fic of my own it is my first fanfic and i hope you injoy reading
it as much as i injoy writting it. here comes part 1-2 of ~*neko:totle
recall1/2*~ (the  title is only till i can come up with a better one.  your
comments and questions are still quite welcome.   note: this will not be a
    lemon)[]=narerater <>=thoughts {}=actions and ()=disriptions

The content of this fic aside (there really isn't enough here yet for
me to comment on that), the plethora of spelling errors, typos,
formatting errors, etc. made this extremely painful to read. I'm not
talking about isolated mistakes or nitpicky little things, but loads
of glaring errors that force the reader to stare at a sentence to
figure out what is being said. Please, please do a better job of
proofreading before you post, or find a pre-reader who can correct
your work for you. Believe me, people will be *much* more likely to
keep reading your work if you don't make it so difficult for them to
do so.

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics