I'm curious what you all thought of Sebastian Weinberg's story,
"Technical Virginity", set in the "Thy Outward Part" universe I
created.
Weeeell, I rarely post public C&C, mainly because it tends to be like
the following, but since you ask, I really enjoyed it. I think Sebbie
got the reluctance and need counterbalanced in Ranma very well.
Kentaro wasn't perfect (but then, who is? Oh, yeah, Nouma.), and
the sex was very well handled. A nice addition to the TOP universe.
--Sean Gaffney
--so, in lieu of posting to Sebbie, here's the C&C