Subject: Re: [FFML] [Lemon][Ranma] Ranma no Hentai! ...? (First draft! C&C please)
From: Caroline Seawright
Date: 1/28/1997, 7:56 AM
To: Ben Kosse
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Mon, 27 Jan 1997, Ben Kosse wrote:

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Ranma nibunnoichi - Ranma no Hentai!! ...?          [WARNING : Lemon fanfic!]

     Every so often, there's a fic which catches you by surprise. This was
one. And, yes, I knew what to expect. More on that at the bottom, OK?

^_^
 
I haven't sent this to my normal editors, either, because I can only assume
that they'll probably rather not touch this one, even with a ten foot pole!
So there'll probably be heaps of grammar and spelling mistakes, so C&C for
that would come in handy along with C&C for everything else!
     I'll do serious C&C tomorrow, OK?

I'll be waiting!

Ah, well ... now it's off to post my first draft ... and to see what, if any,
reaction occurs on the ML. ^^;
     OK. Reaction: good fic. Actually, very good fic. It's not a top-ten
fic, but that doesn't mean I didn't like it.

Well, the reactions so far have all been positive, which is good. If there
were negative ones, they haven't gotten to me yet, or the people are just
keeping really quiet!

     Now, those of you who read my comments about the "gay-Ranma" fics and
might be thinking (or planning to write) that I'm being a hypocrite by
saying I liked this fic.... Well, I'm not, as this wasn't the type of gay
fic I condemned.
     What I condemned was the pointless fics with no explanations. This
(while I didn't particularly like the gay sex scenes), was a work which
made me think: "What if I were in Ranma's place? I hope I would choose the
way he did."
     Like I said, the gay sex scenes didn't particularly interest me, the
rest of the fanfic did. Good job Kun-chan.

*smile* I hoped that I made a story that was worthwhile enough for people
to continue reading, even after they got to the first lemon scene...  In
the replies, it seems that (at least in those cases) that this worked.

It's good that people will read a story, even if it's not a "fanservice"
lemon. ^_^

Kun-chan...