Subject: Re: [FFML] Marital Arts 7 [Ranma Lemon] - Pt1
From: wyrm@mail.utexas.edu (Thomas R Jefferys)
Date: 1/16/1997, 9:08 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

: Female Student:  "Why don't we stop at the Cat Cafe?"
: Female Student:  "Yeah!  Supposedly that new waiter is supposed to
:         be a real stud."

Supposedly he is supposed to?  I'd rephrase that if I were you.

Either "Supposedly, he's a real stud" or "He's supposed to be a real stud"

Or maybe: "He's a real stud"

: The students entered the restaurant, only to see Ranma and Ranko in
: a tight-fitting jeans and shirts.

The "a" doesn't seem to fit here.

That's because pants are plural, even though there's only one pair. { <-Hint }
Besides, there are two of 'em anyway.

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Whose glass is completely empty. And broken.