Um...... Uncle?.....   Something has been Fester-ing me about your story. 
Granted it's VERY funny, but I saw a little......goof.......  Ya' see, when
Akane was holding P-chan and P-chan was squirted with water by
Sasuke in Bloopers & Practical Jokes.  What temp. was the water? 
Right... COLD water.....   :-)  Oops.....  Just a slight goof.  It should have
been hot water.  Nothing serious.  But overall, I have loved both stories. 
Laughed myself almost out of my seat.  Got some strange looks from
others in the computer lab though.  Go figure.  

SuperHentai

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