On Sun, 12 Jan 1997, Gary Kleppe wrote:
On Sun, 12 Jan 1997 11:10:31 -0600 (CST), Scott Jamison
<majks@cyberx.com> wrote:
"Well done, thou good and faithful servant."
Who said that?
Oh.
Oh, my...
Goodness! It's the Dark Lord of Ultimate Terror!
"Er, wait a moment, you aren't Kodachi. Sorry about that..."
You do realize what happened to Kodachi in this story, right?
Seriously, very well done. The only suggestion I would make is to have
the family and friends tell Kasumi all the things she's done for them
over the years, express to her how much she's meant to them; rather
than just saying goodbye.
Good point.
SKJAM!