On Sun, 12 Jan 1997 11:10:31 -0600 (CST), Scott Jamison
<majks@cyberx.com> wrote:

				TERMINUS
			   by Scott K Jamison
			 (Takahashi disclaimer)	

	I lie in darkness for what seems a long time, then there is 
light. 
	"Well done, thou good and faithful servant."
	Who said that? 
	Oh.
	Oh, my...

Goodness! It's the Dark Lord of Ultimate Terror!

"Er, wait a moment, you aren't Kodachi. Sorry about that..."

Seriously, very well done. The only suggestion I would make is to have
the family and friends tell Kasumi all the things she's done for them
over the years, express to her how much she's meant to them; rather
than just saying goodbye.

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics