| Subject: Re: [FFML] [FIC] Nihao, China! (1/?) my first fic! |
| From: JAMES PALMER |
| Date: 1/12/1997, 3:23 PM |
| To: alhuang@hcs.harvard.edu, jmccrabb@mindspring.com |
| CC: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Andrew Huang <alhuang@hcs.harvard.edu> 01/10/97 10:03pm >>>Akane at Jusenkyou? Ah...that's a good one. So far, I've seen very few where Akane gets cursed, and one of them is an Elseworlds fic. So far, except for maybe a bit of verbosity (the same as what Mr. Kleppe said), your story is coming out nicely. I like it.
Ok...... How 'bout making the Tomboy into a real one? Dunno if it's to cliche' or what. Kick that idea arround, whydoncha'? SuperHentai