On Sat, 11 Jan 1997 00:20:06 -0600, Blackbird
<jmccrab@mindspring.com> wrote:

	After travelling several days with their guide, Ranma, Akane, and Genma finally reach Jusenkyo.

reached

	 She looked difiantly at the group of oncoming travellers. 

defiantly

	"My family has been the guardians of Jusenkyo for thousands of years. I am the only one of my family left. My parents died when I was little, leaving me the springs. It was only recently that I became old enough to defend them. If you wish to go to Jusenkyo, you must defeat me first!"

Isn't the Guide (who's with Ranma & co. now) the guardian of Jusenkyo?

	Akane got into her fighting stance and edged towards the girl. The girl ran at Akane and thrust her spear at her, Akane jumped to avoid the attacked

the attack (she is the attacked)

	"Ah! Sirs, there is no Spring of Drowned Man!" he said happily. Ranma grabbed him by his shirt and shook him.

Is he lying? What was the stuff that Happosai drank at R&A's failed
wedding?

	Ranma took Akane's hand as they followed Genma and the guide back down the path in the direction of Japan and home. The young warrior girl looked in envy and hoped that one day, she'd have a relationship like theirs. Little did she know what she was wishing for. :)

Then Ranma woke up from his dream as Akane's mallet crashed down near
his bed. "Get up, you lazy baka!"

The End until I can think of something else.

How can I put this... Fanfiction Lesson #1: You don't have to resolve
all of the relationships in order to have a good fic. In fact, it can
be better if you don't.

Takahashi-sama wrote 38 excellent volumes while pretty much
maintaining the series' status quo. You can too. (Well, you don't have
to do 38 volumes, but you know what I mean.)

Gary

Gary Kleppe
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