| Subject: Re: [FFML] [FIC] Nihao, China! (1/?) my first fic! |
| From: Andrew Huang |
| Date: 1/11/1997, 1:58 AM |
| To: Blackbird |
| CC: "Brendan O'Donnell" <brenda02@sprynet.com>, fanfic@fanfic.com |
About Nihao, China! chapter 2.... I think Akane says a little too much too fast. Let her and Ranma have a conversation, not Akane just blurt out everything.... >From the desktop of the Taiwanese-American-German-Scot, Wakko "Andrew" Huang Brought to you by his computer, Oddzilla Oddzilla says, "Ryouga and Ukyou! Ukyou and Ryouga!" http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang