Date: Fri, 10 Jan 1997 21:17:14 -0600
To: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
From: Blackbird <jmccrabb@mindspring.com>
Subject: Re: [FFML] [FIC] Nihao, China! (1/?) my first fic!

This is good ol' original flavor stuff. The characterizations all seem
good. I don't know about this plot. It's too soon to see where it's
going. I hope Akane being kidnapped and Ranma having to rescue her
isn't the main plot, because that kind of thing has been done so much
already. You're using a lot of standard Ranma elements in here, which
is fine by me, but now it's time to add something different.

Gary

it's part of the plot, but not the main one. They will eventually make it
Jesenkyo (spelling) and Akane will fall in one...



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