Akane at Jusenkyou? Ah...that's a good one. So far, I've seen very
few where Akane gets cursed, and one of them is an Elseworlds fic. So far,
except for maybe a bit of verbosity (the same as what Mr. Kleppe said),
your story is coming out nicely. I like it.

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