Ladies and Gentlemen, and those of you oscillating between the two, I'm not
well known here. So far I posted part of a fanfic I started, but felt was dead
in the water. I received some constructive criticism, and decided to let that
one die, and use my newfound wisdom to start over.

  Since then I've posted 2 short vignettes which received some praise, and no
comments entitled "Regrets After It's Too Late" and "Ubiquitous Tears", and a
humorous crossover with Ranma and Rocky Horror entitled "Ranma's Revenge: Look
What I Found In The Attic" which elicited one groan.

  I've been writing one serious work which has taken me some time. The story
so far covers 5 days, and clocks in at 85K, with an outline that covers two
more weeks. I'm a ridiculously slow writer, and won't post any of it until
I've written a good bit more.

  Meanwhile I've been twice sidetracked by ideas that wouldn't leave until I
wrote them out. The short one is a complete story, the longer one has the
shortest prose possible in order to express my idea (It's not the sort of fic
I want to write, but I had to get the idea out of my head).

  I NEED criticism on both of them. I hope they interest you.
						Neil Reynolds