Hmmmmmmm....... how can I say this I really liked the history it was short
but really fun the only trouble that I found was the fact that, I had to
guess who was who and well and well it goes like this correct me if im
wrong, the who was the center of the talk was Ranma ne? (If was kuno i
don't whant to see more of this fanfic ;) ).

The girl was obiusly Nabiki (im sure that she wasn't Kasumi beacuse she 
never said "Oh My"^_- ) but in the last part when she was going to kiss him i
didn't understood what's her meaning when she says " he tries to hide the 
fact that he's blushing, that's when I know that I got him... And good." 
well maybe im a little dense you need to say it in another way she said 
that impliying the he's in love of her or he just likes her ???
(yes i know maybe im a little dense but i dont want to die whitout knowing 
the answer >:] ) 

By the way good fanfic and im lookng forward the next part
you should make them bigger and i think that this one was really soft not 
even a lemonade ^_^&

Later 

Tony