Not bad, not bad.... There are three things, though. First, if
Jeff's been dating Nabiki for 8 months, he definitely would have known
about Ranma having multiple fiancees. Second, as bubbleheaded as Shampoo
may *seem*, I really don't think that she's have so much difficulty
understand Kasumi and how the ceremony was in honor of Nabiki's mother.
Thirdly, I think you have a little too much animosity between Akane and
Ukyou. They may be rivals, but they don't dislike each other that much.
>From what I know, their rivalry is not personal, really. It's over Ranma,
that's granted, but they do get along. 'Kay? Thanks.

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