At 01:10 PM 1/6/97 -0500, Andrew Huang wrote:

	I pounded this out within an hour....

It's pretty good for such a short time.

"I Am a Part...." by Andrew Huang

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 Hello. Allow me to introduce myself. I am a part of Saotome Ranma. 
I'm the part who loves Tendou Akane, without reservation.

 Surprised? Don't be. I've always been here. Granted, you don't get 
to see very much of me. Usually, you see the abrasive idiot who insults 
Akane and annoys the hell out of her.

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 I am only a part of Ran.... No. No, dammit, no!

 It's gone on too long. I can't let this happen anymore.

 I...am Ranma.

_ I_ _am_ _Ranma_!

As if the other parts are going to give up their share of Ranma's brain 
without a fight.  Maybe you should have a different chapter for each part:

Chapter 2: "I'm the part who is the abrasive idiot who insults Akane and 
           annoys the hell out of her."
Chapter 3: "I'm the part who misses his mommy."
Chapter 4: "I'm the part who loves Ukyou because she makes more sense."
Chapter 5: "I'm the part who thinks Shampoo should put clothes on because 
           colds are bad."
Chapter 6: "I'm the part who controls the lungs and blood circulation.  If 
           the part who loves Akane gets rid of me he's in big trouble."
etc.